I have a similar problem so i maybe notice it more easily, but it looks like some of your images are a touch out of focus, making sure that they're crisp will dramatically improve the impact of your images
I think all your photos show a good understanding of rule of thirds. Some of your photos could be improved if you pushed the contrast, such as the leaves(the leaves are too close a gray to the side walk) or the globe(making the background lighter might make the globe pop more).
I'm not sure why but I like the picture of the white fountain. I also think that for the blur and stop motion images that could be an interesting jumping off point, like capturing moving water in different ways. I also would love to see different perspectives of people. I like that you chose to use a model! I know that really capturing people is difficult and think perhaps that choosing to focus on a specific part of the body (e.i. hands, hand, legs) could help you hone that skill. Also I agree with Alex about keeping things in focus, for are tricky.
I agree that your photos are all well-composed and great example of using the rule of thirds. I also really like the contrast in the 7th photo of the leaves and the 5th of the bench. The motion and contrast in the photo of the cat is also very intriguing. I am just curious if there was a reason behind having your model holding a phone. It seems like an intentional choice so I was interested in the idea behind it.
I have a similar problem so i maybe notice it more easily, but it looks like some of your images are a touch out of focus, making sure that they're crisp will dramatically improve the impact of your images
ReplyDeleteNice use of rule of thirds in the globe photo. I like the last photo. It's very tumblr-esque.
ReplyDeleteyou have some nice compositions
ReplyDeleteI think all your photos show a good understanding of rule of thirds. Some of your photos could be improved if you pushed the contrast, such as the leaves(the leaves are too close a gray to the side walk) or the globe(making the background lighter might make the globe pop more).
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure why but I like the picture of the white fountain. I also think that for the blur and stop motion images that could be an interesting jumping off point, like capturing moving water in different ways. I also would love to see different perspectives of people. I like that you chose to use a model! I know that really capturing people is difficult and think perhaps that choosing to focus on a specific part of the body (e.i. hands, hand, legs) could help you hone that skill. Also I agree with Alex about keeping things in focus, for are tricky.
ReplyDeleteI agree that your photos are all well-composed and great example of using the rule of thirds. I also really like the contrast in the 7th photo of the leaves and the 5th of the bench. The motion and contrast in the photo of the cat is also very intriguing. I am just curious if there was a reason behind having your model holding a phone. It seems like an intentional choice so I was interested in the idea behind it.
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