I like the candid/story telling aspect of some of these photos, especially the picture of the dog on the leash trying so hard to break free. You did a great job of capturing depth of field.
I adore the photo of the little girl with the hula hoop. you really captured the motion well. I would also like to see more of a contrast between the woman in 4th photo and the background
I think your second to last photo is fantastic. The way you captured the light and the shadows is just great. Your last photo is a great depth of field example. Unlike most close-ups, that have one subject and a blurred background, I like that in this we can still read the sign behind the gas pump.
I really enjoy the second to last photo. Unlike the rest of the pictures (which seem to have a lot of grey tones) it has a high contrast of the really dark and light tones. I also really like the use of line in this one. The contrast of the parking lot lines and shadowed lines work well in establishing the trash can as the subject. That being said you did a good job in establishing a subject in each image. I don't know if it's just the quality of my computer screen but some of the images seem slightly out of focus. If it's not just me I think that would be something to work on in future weeks.
I love the curved linework you captured in image 7. Image 8 is also very visually appealing--the subtle bend in the path is a gentle contrast to the perfect symmetry of the foreground. Compositionally I would have liked to see the squirrel picture weighted to one side or the other. It feels a little boring being oriented dead center. Overall, nice job!
I love the curved linework you captured in image 7. Image 8 is also very visually appealing--the subtle bend in the path is a gentle contrast to the perfect symmetry of the foreground. Compositionally I would have liked to see the squirrel picture weighted to one side or the other. It feels a little boring being oriented dead center. Overall, nice job!
Your photos are all very dynamic and do a great job of capturing or alluding to motion. I agree with Lindsey that there is a storytelling aspect to many of the images. The first and second photos of the dog and girl with hula hoop show the figure in motion. Other more static images still tell a story by leading the viewer's eye. The cropping of the picture of the back of the woman's head leads the eye toward the people at the restaurant. The perspective of the gas pump includes the car and the gas station sign as well. Really good example of incorporating narrative into a lot of these photos.
I like the candid/story telling aspect of some of these photos, especially the picture of the dog on the leash trying so hard to break free. You did a great job of capturing depth of field.
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ReplyDeleteI adore the photo of the little girl with the hula hoop. you really captured the motion well. I would also like to see more of a contrast between the woman in 4th photo and the background
ReplyDeleteI think your second to last photo is fantastic. The way you captured the light and the shadows is just great. Your last photo is a great depth of field example. Unlike most close-ups, that have one subject and a blurred background, I like that in this we can still read the sign behind the gas pump.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy the second to last photo. Unlike the rest of the pictures (which seem to have a lot of grey tones) it has a high contrast of the really dark and light tones. I also really like the use of line in this one. The contrast of the parking lot lines and shadowed lines work well in establishing the trash can as the subject. That being said you did a good job in establishing a subject in each image. I don't know if it's just the quality of my computer screen but some of the images seem slightly out of focus. If it's not just me I think that would be something to work on in future weeks.
ReplyDeleteI love the curved linework you captured in image 7. Image 8 is also very visually appealing--the subtle bend in the path is a gentle contrast to the perfect symmetry of the foreground. Compositionally I would have liked to see the squirrel picture weighted to one side or the other. It feels a little boring being oriented dead center. Overall, nice job!
ReplyDeleteI love the curved linework you captured in image 7. Image 8 is also very visually appealing--the subtle bend in the path is a gentle contrast to the perfect symmetry of the foreground. Compositionally I would have liked to see the squirrel picture weighted to one side or the other. It feels a little boring being oriented dead center. Overall, nice job!
ReplyDeleteYour photos are all very dynamic and do a great job of capturing or alluding to motion. I agree with Lindsey that there is a storytelling aspect to many of the images. The first and second photos of the dog and girl with hula hoop show the figure in motion. Other more static images still tell a story by leading the viewer's eye. The cropping of the picture of the back of the woman's head leads the eye toward the people at the restaurant. The perspective of the gas pump includes the car and the gas station sign as well. Really good example of incorporating narrative into a lot of these photos.
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